pilots


20
Jan 10

You Should Change Your Audience

When my Iraq pilot ends, I want the audience to be different.

They’ll be different because they shifted. Because the characters shift. The audience identifies with the characters, forms a bond with them that pulls them up and down through the piece, changes them as the character changes.

Stories help us feel what it would be like to be in someone else’s shoes. They give us the gift of empathy, the gift of identifying from a different direction. A woman walks away identifying as a man.

You help your characters shift by making the powers that oppose them overwhelming. The more acute the opposition, the more we’ll feel the urgency of the situation, and the more vital and primal the bond we’ll form. That person struggles. I struggle. I understand how that person feels. A man walks away identifying as a woman.

In my pilot, male soldiers discover they have to work with women during active combat, and they feel dragged down, challenged, threatened, unsafe. The female soldiers feel unprepared, untrained, unwelcome, unsupported.

Most of them experience a shift. If the piece works, the audience identifies with them at the start and shifts along with them.

By the end, the characters circle near the feeling -

We are all women. And we are all men.

If the story works, my audience will feel that too.

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14
Jan 10

Find A Way To Make It Acute

Last year I wrote a pilot about modern day pirates that was set in Haiti. I chose Haiti because it’s one of the poorest countries on Earth — both left behind and close to home. I felt it was real life Sci Fi. The sense of place was an important part of the piece. Now Haiti has been destroyed a thousand times more — before it was a silent catastrophe in our midst, now it will be a devastatingly loud one. While I was writing, I felt frustrated because all I wanted to do was talk about it. And no one wanted to hear it.

Now I’m writing a pilot about Iraq, and everything’s that wrong over there feels overwhelming to me. Horrifying suicide rates among active duty soldiers and veterans. Sickeningly high sexual assault rates for female soldiers, by fellow soldiers — as high as 30%. Unnecessary civilian deaths. Unnecessary soldier deaths. Outrageously corrupt war profiteering. No one over there seems to know what we’re doing over there. This is all going on — and no one cares. No one wants to hear about it, no one wants to listen. No one gives a fuck. We are members of a democratic society who have orchestrated this, and by not rising up and expressing our outrage and ending this, we are responsible. A tragedy occurs in our midst, and we are responsible.

No one cares because the Iraq story is not acute. Like the Haiti story, it was just happening. It was horrific and terrible and outrageous, but there was no moment that was more horrific and terrible and outrageous than the next. There was no acute focus to the story, no lens to help us understand how to feel about it.

With Haiti, those people had always been crushingly poor and betrayed by corrupt leaders, right? How is one day different from the next? Many people have difficulty feeling empathy for people they don’t relate to — or they don’t find a way to relate to people whose plights aren’t right in front of them. Suddenly there’s a horrible earthquake — something that any of us might experience any day — it taps into our fears about our own safety — we could lose our homes just like they did, we could be wandering the streets just like them – then as we wallow in the disaster porn because it stirs up all those feelings so many of us yearn to feel every day but don’t have access to — empathy, understanding, fear, grief — feelings that get buried by everyday life’s efficiency and competency and need to look emotionally stable — disaster porn allows us to access all those feelings — and once accessed, we get it. Wait a minute, they were fucked before this horrible earthquake. They’ve been fucked for a very long time. I just wasn’t thinking about it. It took this acute story, the flurry of excitement, the urgency and concentration of focus centered on the need to find people, find shelter, find medical aid, find water, the sheer drama of it all — that’s what it took for us to care.

If there were a terrible earthquake in Iraq, would people care about the war?

The other big story this week has been the Leno/Conan/NBC war, with virtually everyone I know declaring for “Team Conan.” Both Team Leno and Team Conan are teams that do not hire any women writers. How is it possible that with all this media coverage, no one discusses that fact? If Conan O’Brien released a carefully worded statement declaring his intention to never hire women writers, there would be a public outcry. No one would join “Team Conan” then. However, by not declaring his intention but instead just doing it, no one calls him out on it, no one gives a fuck. It’s the Haiti, Iraq problem: the story is outrageous but not acute. People shrug it off as just the way it is. There’s no urgency, no face on the story — no highly qualified woman who should have gotten a job on the show and was told “we don’t hire women” walking out of the studio with a brave face. No disaster porn to allow people to access their empathy.

The lesson here is this: if you have an important story you want to spread, find a way to make it acute. Give it a face and a focus and make it urgent. Shape it into disaster porn.

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14
Aug 09

Egyptian Fishermen Kick Some Somali Pirate Ass

I wrote a one-hour drama pilot about modern day pirates–before modern day pirates became a big story. So I’ve been following the latest developments in the pirate community:

BOSASSO, Somalia (Reuters) – The crews of two Egyptian fishing vessels have escaped from Somali pirates after overpowering their captors and killing two of them, an associate of the pirates said on Friday.

The kidnappers had held the 34 fishermen hostage since hijacking the Momtaz 1 and Samara Ahmed in April. Gunmen from the failed Horn of Africa state have made tens of millions of dollars in ransoms from attacks in the strategic Gulf of Aden.

An associate of the pirates told Reuters the Egyptians escaped on Thursday after seizing his colleagues’ weapons. Two pirates were killed in a shoot-out, several were captured and one was rescued after being stabbed and thrown into the sea.

via Egyptian fishermen escape from Somali pirates | International | Reuters .

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3
Aug 09

Start With the Ship In A Bottle

Battlestar/Buffy writer Jane Espenson’s blog about writing specs is still incredibly useful, even though she’s not updating it anymore. I perused it over a break today and saw this entry in which she discussed her friend Jeff Greenstein’s advice that pilots’ opening images should contain the series in microcosm. Following is the very persuasive list he composed. (I agree with this idea and would argue it’s a pretty good idea for novels as well.)

In the Cheers pilot, the teaser is Sam with an underage kid who’s trying to get a drink using a fake military ID. Kid says he was in the war. Sam asks what it was like. “It was gross,” the kid replies with a shudder. “Yeah, that’s what they say — war is gross,” Sam replies. The teaser gives you a sense of the place and the guy.

The Battlestar pilot has that great opening scene with Number Six and the emissary from Earth. The scene says, “Remember those metal robots? They look like humans now. And they’re going to fucking kill you.”

The Lost pilot starts with a close-up of an eye opening, and the aftermath of the plane crash. This show is about consciousness and strandedness and tragedy.

Will & Grace starts with Grace in bed with her sleeping fiancé, yet on the phone dishing with Will about George Clooney’s hotness. It’s the perfect encapsulation of their odd relationship.

The Desperate Housewives teaser: In the midst of tranquil suburban splendor, Mary Alice blows her head off.

The West Wing pilot: In a bar, talking off-the-record with a reporter, Sam Seaborn is distracted by a hot girl who’s giving him the eye. This show is about politics and sex (well, it started out that way), and the “backstage” lives of people in government.

via Jane Espenson.

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27
Jul 09

“Sargasso Planet” Happily Tricks Internet | Culturewav.es Blog

I really admire what NBC’s doing to market their new drama DAY ONE. Before the show even hits the air, the folks involved are setting up a mythological scaffolding that fans will gravitate towards like sea life to the footing of an oil rig. As Ashley Edward Miller (@ashman01) mused about on Twitter, it’s really important for Sci Fi dramas in particular to develop a fanbase who care enough and have enough story tools to give the story life outside the confines of what airs.

DAY ONE’s marketing campaign has been so smart because they made a character into a big fan of a show we’ve never heard of … so not only is the character just like us (meaning we relate), the character is also spreading the word about something we think we probably need to hear about, because it sounds like a real show. What’s this new show we’ve never heard of? I thought I’d heard of everything … etc. Early adopters quickly jump on board and DAY ONE becomes cool. Marketing success. Below is a write-up of the campaign:

So today I was browsing through my daily list of blogs and to my surprise came across an article about the most expensive piece of merchandise at San Diego Comic Con this year: For $147,000 you can be the proud owner of a very rare treasure indeed- four original toys from the classic sci-fi show “Sargasso Planet.” Then I happened upon another also reporting on it. Both sites wondered about “Sargasso Planet,” and both sites talk about the craziness of the price tag of those toys. The funny thing is? They’re unknowingly reporting on fake toys for a television show that never existed. “Sargasso Planet” is a viral campaign for NBC’s next big show “Day One.” It’s set to take over the “Heroes” time slot and has something to do with a cataclysmic ending of our world and the subsequent survivors.

This by far is one of the more successful and clever bids I’ve seen in a while for a viral campaign, especially at something that’s getting as much attention this year as San Diego Comic Con. There’s already a fansite set up by one of the main characters of Day One, Sargassoplanet.com. It was intentionally designed crudely so it looks like a fan made it on his home computer in his spare time. The site in fact has links to Sargasso Twitter feeds, Facebook groups and Flickr feeds. In other words, without coming out and saying it, it’s a hub for viral marketing.

Well played NBC, well played indeed.

via “Sargasso Planet” wins the internet! | Culturewav.es Blog .

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27
Jun 09

Russian Tourists Hunt Pirates

My drama pilot is about modern pirates. I wrote it before the big craze for pirates, so I feel a little disappointed that now everyone’s on the bandwagon. Just like what happened with my novel about prescription drugs, which I wrote years before everyone discovered prescription drug addiction.

Luxury yachts offer pirate hunting cruises

Luxury ocean liners in Russia are offering pirate hunting cruises aboard armed private yachts off the Somali coast.

Pirate flag /Rex

Wealthy punters pay £3,500 per day to patrol the most dangerous waters in the world hoping to be attacked by raiders.

http://www.ananova.com/news/story/sm_3374702.html

http://current.com/items/90270212_whoa-rich-russians-to-kill-pirates-on-vacation.htm

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